Servants of Solitude

In disingenuous defenseless dreams of the damned have wept
They awaken within sempiternal solitudes that they have slept
They're above all asseveration of tenacious tears they accept
For inside patricentric passage of time becomes illogically inept

The axiomatic assembly of manqué multitudes in pacifistic plight
Their damnation dorms of diversity desecrated upon a fatal finite
Humankind’s humility a harbinger of ritualistic recrudescent rite
And sorrowful sins syndicate with vigorous velocity and appetite

Their altruistic ambient soul tangled torn beyond comprehension
Desolate deprived within a deceitful delight of a demons detention
Isolated and audaciously abandoned onto the grasp of evil intention
May love levitate their tragic turmoil and align them with ascension.





March.28.2018
Triple-A Challenge
Sponsored by: Robert Haigh


Placed 9'th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Haight Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 7:08 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, ^WW^! Amazing Alliteration and great use of the required words! But you have also imaged how much sadness there is in some parts of our world. Well-done. Sandra
Richards Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 11:04 AM
This was a challenge, and you have stepped up with an amazing poem! Congrats to you Winged Warrior!
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 4:55 PM
Love all the alliteration. Congrats on your win, Winged Warrior, with this well penned poem.
Gentry Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 4:11 AM
Oh what a shame, the video has been blocked in Oz for some silly reason, disappointing, never the less, your title of the "Internal Rhyme Master will now also have to include Alliteration Pro. I very much favor what Arturo says ..;.Soul will experience what it needs' ..Its what I have always believed. An impressive write WW and a fave with me....Maria
Sands Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Very well written poem with a powerful ending that I love. Excellent for the contest challenge. ! :)
One Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:49 AM
You've gone alliteration crazy... Your video made me very sad, I've been to pats of Asia and other countries and have seen this.. Rio in Brazil was one of the worse places for it...
Michael Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 6:24 AM
And love will save them if not has already done so...soull will experience what it needs...A lovely heart in your poem...All the best WW...Happy Easter
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 11:33 PM
A lovely dark brooding poem. Superbly done, WW.
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