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~ the ragged-edged word, breathed like a blade in your grasp - you thrust deep ... "goodbye" ~ ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Wow Me With A One-Liner! Monoku" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Sponsor.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/15/2018 10:29:00 AM

Much emotion in this one-liner. Congrats on your top win, Gregory.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/15/2018 6:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Line! :-)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/9/2018 12:40:00 PM

This is a definite stunner Greg, congrats on another win!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/9/2018 8:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, John! :-)

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/2/2018 1:21:00 AM

I like this... Congratulations on your placement. A fave.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/2/2018 5:00:00 PM

Thank you very much, Susan, I'm pleased you enjoyed it! :-) <3

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/1/2018 2:23:00 PM

Back with congrats! <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/2/2018 4:59:00 PM

Thanks, Dear Mo! :-) <3

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/1/2018 12:51:00 PM

Brilliant Gregory, congratulations...

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/2/2018 4:59:00 PM

Thanks so much, Charlie! :-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/1/2018 12:28:00 PM

Back again with congratulations you so richly deserve! Best always, Gershon

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/2/2018 4:59:00 PM

Many thanks, My Poetic Brother! :-)

Silent One

Date: 6/1/2018 5:15:00 AM

Goodbyes are the hardest thing... deep an emotive one liner Greg... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/2/2018 4:59:00 PM

Indeed, you are correct - thank you for the placement, S1.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/31/2018 10:06:00 PM

Masterful, Gregory! I'd wish you luck in the contest---but 'luck' is the poorest word choice possible here. The hard work of writing is all the 'luck' you require. This is a fave! :) gw

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/1/2018 3:41:00 AM

Many kind thanks to you, My Friend, I greatly appreciate it - so pleased you enjoyed this one! :-)