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Serpentine Waters

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Crystal clear serpentine waters gurgle, gushing over small rocks. A fly rides the turbulent surf as I wade hip deep rod in hand. And I feel the river’s fingers tugging, trying to trip me up. (Lyric/Verse )

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/25/2018 9:38:00 PM

Beautiful, Emile. Few but very well chose words.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2017 12:14:00 AM

I enjoyed this piece, congrats!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2017 8:25:00 AM

Thanks Richard, your support is appreciated, Emile.

James Inman

Date: 3/30/2017 7:58:00 AM

A very playful and enjoyable write Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/30/2017 8:29:00 AM

Thanks James, your support is appreciated, Emile.

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/19/2017 2:04:00 PM

"chuckling softly" - this made me laugh, Emile. : ) So true - that's exactly it!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2017 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Doug, I appreciate your support... you know how to create a smile, Emile.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/19/2017 8:12:00 AM

Well done Emile, congratulations...

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2017 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Charlie, your support is appreciated, Emile.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/6/2017 12:11:00 AM

This is perfect. I love it, Emile ... CayCay

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/6/2017 8:01:00 AM

Thanks CayCay, I appreciate your support, Emile.

Gary Bateman

Date: 3/5/2017 5:51:00 PM

Hello Emile!! Great Picture, and your depiction of the "Serpentine Waters" does indeed pull the reader right into the text of the verses and the events at hand. Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/6/2017 8:02:00 AM

Thanks Gary, I appreciate your support, Emile.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/5/2017 5:11:00 PM

This brings the reader right there Emile. I enjoyed it. Well written :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/6/2017 8:02:00 AM

Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support, Emile.