Emile Pinet Poet Verse

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Serpentine Waters

Crystal clear serpentine waters

gurgle, gushing over small rocks.

A fly rides the turbulent surf

as I wade hip deep rod in hand.
 
And I feel the river’s fingers

tugging, trying to trip me up.



(Lyric/Verse )

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Line Gauthier May 25, 2018 at 9:38 PM Beautiful, Emile. Few but very well chose words. Emile Pinet May 26, 2018 at 8:31 AM Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Richard Lamoureux April 4, 2017 at 12:14 AM I enjoyed this piece, congrats! Emile Pinet April 4, 2017 at 8:25 AM Thanks Richard, your support is appreciated, Emile.

James Inman March 30, 2017 at 7:58 AM A very playful and enjoyable write Emile. Emile Pinet March 30, 2017 at 8:29 AM Thanks James, your support is appreciated, Emile.

Doug Vinson March 19, 2017 at 2:04 PM "chuckling softly" - this made me laugh, Emile. : ) So true - that's exactly it! Emile Pinet March 19, 2017 at 5:17 PM Thanks Doug, I appreciate your support... you know how to create a smile, Emile.

Charlie Smith March 19, 2017 at 8:12 AM Well done Emile, congratulations... Emile Pinet March 19, 2017 at 9:56 AM Thanks Charlie, your support is appreciated, Emile.

CayCay Godwin March 6, 2017 at 12:11 AM This is perfect. I love it, Emile ... CayCay Emile Pinet March 6, 2017 at 8:01 AM Thanks CayCay, I appreciate your support, Emile.

Gary Bateman March 5, 2017 at 5:51 PM Hello Emile!! Great Picture, and your depiction of the "Serpentine Waters" does indeed pull the reader right into the text of the verses and the events at hand. Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary Emile Pinet March 6, 2017 at 8:02 AM Thanks Gary, I appreciate your support, Emile.

Heidi Sands March 5, 2017 at 5:11 PM This brings the reader right there Emile. I enjoyed it. Well written :) Emile Pinet March 6, 2017 at 8:02 AM Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support, Emile.