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Serpentine Narcissus

My mind hibernates in the void of cavernous complexity, wakes up in the sensual seasons of mystique living. The wild psyche forms a sleek and sly unique entity, as with whisper of intent hiss, dances the reptilian feeling. Within the deep cold layers many ancient secrets hide, the sinuous slither of the silent senses can’t find. Coiled in still shadows of the verdant world outside, the echo of hostile footsteps is left to fade behind. A prisoner under the disposable skin of own pedigree, with an animated grace of fear in introvert isolation, I see all the frightened faces flee from me, as I trace my tortuous path in the web of ardent adulation. In self-adoration, as a symbol of style steeped in serenity, I see in me a serpentine Narcissus lonely lurk. Metamorphosed stealthily from an obsessive entity, it holds the threads of life, waits insulated in the dark.

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Date: 4/13/2025 6:31:00 PM
Dear Subimal, an exquisite poem spilled from your gifted poetic pen. Your use of creative expression always impresses me. Beautifully done! Congratulations for your success in Sara’s contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/13/2025 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan for your wonderful and encouraging comments I so heartily appreciate. Best wishes.
Date: 4/10/2025 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in my contest. I enjoyed your wordplay in your write. Your use of metaphors is brillant. You wove an elaborate story. Your last stanza "In self-adoration, as a symbol of style steeped in serenity, I see in me a serpentine Narcissus lonely lurk. Metamorphosed stealthily from an obsessive entity, it holds the threads of life, waits insulated in the dark," is gorgeously done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/13/2025 8:30:00 PM
Thank you for the placement and for your wonderful comments.
Date: 4/10/2025 9:00:00 AM
A powerful take , so well woven with brilliant metaphors and alliterations! Love the ending the most here and the concept youv gone for which is unique! Congratulations dear SSR, wel deserved win: sending you light
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/10/2025 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging comments. Your poem on the theme is superb.

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