Serpentine

Serpents under blue light
Vitality estranged
I lay across an angel
But this is all the same

Regard my careful feelings
As words that don’t exist
But if you find them stalking
Run before we kiss

Serpents guard my patience
Lust holds up my face
I walk beneath a rainbow
But only for the taste

Remember your deception
Place it over me
Filter out my scheming
There’s nothing much to see

Serpents in the twilight
Serpents in the rain
A snake summons your weakness
And leads me to your pain

Serpents intertwining
A serpent calls your name
Take one step and follow
Well this is all the same
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Angel Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 1:02 PM
I believe quite frankly this is my favorite work done by you...Your words are still yet so powerful time after time, leaving me quite in awe at your quite talented lyrics. Your Angel of Music-:)
Guzzi Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 5:15 PM
I can't believe there are not RULES for punctuation and capitalization in poetry GOD! there are always rules for everything. As much as I'd love to believe it I don't. Perhaps if we'd made our names and were e e cummings who apparently hated Caps? Ok enough blither. I always enjoy your verse finding it thought provoking. Light & Love and Happy Holy Days and yes London has changes so much in the past 20 years but so has NY and the world.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 4:44 PM
Wonderful expression... '...I lay across an angel,' '...but only for the taste,' - unique phrasing. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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