Serpent Sway


Observe the movements of a serpent,
see how it moves on the ground
It never moves in a straight line;
always left to right,
right to left
Like a crooked S
That crooked walk is the serpent sway ---
never gonna come straight,
that ain't the serpent way
All I know, is what the Holy Bible say:
don't turn aside to the right hand or to the left
Walk the straight and narrow path ...
stay spiritually deft
The serpent sway is the crooked walk,
shifting right to left, then left to right
Changing the truth is how the wicked talk
The crooked walk is the serpent sway ...
never gonna come at you straight,
so don't learn to walk that way
Don't be a snake in the grass, okay!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nusker Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 11:47 AM
I totally get this amazing poem with a wonderful message, Freddie.
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Superb! The imagery, satire, message, just everything is amazing. Well written yet again, my friend.
Y. Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Hi Freddie, These are some wise words with good advice. Your poems always stand out because they are centered around what you hold true. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
Hoffman Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Have seen some in the grass living in the south giving me the heebie jeebies!! Good one with a really good message Freddie!:)
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 6:17 AM
Highly readable write ... straight metaphors like difficult straight path ... without much math ... enjoyed much ...
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 3:14 AM
Your ending made me smile Freddie. Your metaphors in this piece stand out and are of value. I certainly relate to the middle road. A great poem my friend. Happy holidays! ; ) 7
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