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Seriously Bewildered

Although the scent of laughter flows Into my wind-swept breath , I hesitate the call of his rugged charm As violin notes serenade temptation’s play To crawl upon my luscious flesh igniting Evening's spice of an earthy maleness … I quiver. While moonshine drapes the porch-light's view, He pulls me nearer in warm embrace Fondling lines of my glistened back-- How in slow-fire drift, I claim effort To regain awareness from this hazy trance. In a hush flush, I gently leave bewildered Denying our first plunge with a ‘ no, not yet’… But seriously , in the brink of hunger and craving, My raw instinct pleaded to utter ………’yes.’ john lawless' Contest: But Seriously 1/26/2017

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Date: 2/8/2017 11:17:00 PM
Passion aflame...:D OOOh this IS hot! Congrats on your win. :)
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Date: 2/7/2017 9:41:00 PM
Oh, Nette, you big tease you!!! A very spicy take on the serious nature of the quest....Thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 2/7/2017 8:51:00 AM
James' comment below was spot on. Lovely poem. That hunger can overwhelm at times. Congrats!
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Date: 2/5/2017 2:45:00 AM
A sensuous write with a heavy sigh ending. My admiration for the strength of women who keep us from venturing into situations that we may ultimately live to regret. On the other hand...
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Date: 1/27/2017 9:43:00 PM
Oh I like this Romantic Sensual write,,, good luck in the contest
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Date: 1/26/2017 11:45:00 PM
I can resonate with this astounding poem-- to surrender or restrain from the first stirring of passion-- well delivered.
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:50:00 PM
Ah, the battle of virtue and desire. magnificently portrayed, nette:)
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Date: 1/26/2017 5:37:00 PM
Beautifully done ..I think from reading this you should listen to Gato Barbieri on sax playing Europa...
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Date: 1/26/2017 3:10:00 PM
You are so very creative my friend, this was wonderfully thought out and presented, just like I usually find here. Beautiful Nette.
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Date: 1/26/2017 2:45:00 PM
Totally enticing poem! I can recall the feeling of one of those nights when attraction flows and she bows out. You create an intriguing story proving the how illustrious a poet you are!.
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Date: 1/26/2017 12:17:00 PM
- Intense emotions in your romantic poems, Nette :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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