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Serenity of Blue


Serenity Of Blue


As in our rivers' varied tints of blues,
   the color blends are peaceful and serene,
in ripples of reflective color hues
   that mirror mix of sky and hills of green.

Yet, 'midst the flowers in our fields that grow,
   real blue in blooms is very scarce indeed.
The few we see will thrill us with their show;
   Delphiniums or blue wildflower weeds.

And too, in foods the color blue is rare
   most fruits display a color that attracts,
like tangerine, red apple, plum, and pear;
   somehow the color blue in food detracts.

So nature gifts us blues in soft sky blue
   reflected in her rivers, lakes or seas.
Though rarest of earth colors, it is true,
   serenity of blue will always please.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Mid-May Standard
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 05/14/2018

~2nd Place~
Contest: The Color Blue
Sponsor: Janis Thompson
Judged: 01/30/2017
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Gauthier Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Lovely, Sandra. Congrats on you gold medal win.
Martin Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 3:40 PM
Congrats on your win Sandra! Never thought of blue food being unappetising before - makes sense. Except for blueberries of course! :-)
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:17 PM
Thank you, Mark. Yes, I think blueberries are the only 'blue' food that we enjoy! Thanks for the congrats. Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 9:50 AM
I just discovered a new respect for blue after reading your poem Sandra!
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:15 PM
Thank you so much, Sara. Hugs, Sandra
U.D Palawon  Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 11:07 PM
Indeed serene,Sandra...Well done with this fabulous write! :) Congrats.
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:15 PM
Thank you very much, Sunita. Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Congrats great blue poem x
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:14 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy! Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:17 AM
"Serenity of blue will always please" - How true, Sandra!!! This is beautiful:) congratulations on your well deserved win:) a 10 from me:)
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:14 PM
Thank you very much, Jo. Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 1:41 AM
Hi Sandra. Congrats for your well, deserved second placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:14 PM
Thank you so much, Teddy. Sandra
Burch Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Congratulations Sandra!! Well done!! Big Hugggs! :) deb
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Thank you very much, Deborah. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 9:17 PM
Congrats on a fine win Sandra
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph! Sandra
Polydoro Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 7:06 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra, a great poem :)
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Thank you very much, Claudia! Sandra
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 5:33 PM
absolutely beautiful Sandra congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Thank you very much, Jan! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 4:32 PM
Great poem,great win Sandra!
Haight Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Thank you, John. Sandra
Nusker Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Wonderfully described the tints of blue. Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Thank you very much, Afzal! Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 12:40 PM
As always, the flowing beautiful poetry turns out to be your. Well written iambic pentameter. Love to read it. Congratulations.
Haight Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Thank you so much, Janis, for the inspirational contest and for my awesome placement! Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Beautiful, Sandra. Blue skies are somehow magical Good luck in the contest.
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Thanks so much, Agnes! Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 12:42 PM
Simply beautiful, Mrs Sandra. Good luck:)
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 2:45 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel, for your nice comment. Nature always inspires me! Sandra
Green Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Very beautiful and soothing Sandra. A really nice blur poem. Good luck in the contest.
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 2:46 PM
Thank you, Chris. I appreciate your visit and nice comments. Sandra
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