Serenity

Vision of stillness

breathtakingly beautiful

 peace, serenity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Winter Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 11:45 AM
just what I need, a lovely moment of peace. such a beautiful haiku. thank you sweet friend for stopping by with a comment and remembering me. hope all is well and life is good. warm hugs, shar xoxo
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March 28, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Such a peaceful view. You have me smiling. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment on mine. Keep on writing. Have a good week. Karen
Guzzi Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 5:17 PM
interesting...thought provoking. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Excellent write..I can see the scene..Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.. Sara
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 6:32 AM
What peace you have portrayed in these words, Phyllis. Very nice haiku. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Mehta Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 7:41 PM
stillness and serenity - going together. Fine thought.
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 8:21 PM
Lovely, Phyllis!
La France Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 7:15 PM
This is an enchanting haiku, best of luck in the contest... Constance
Strand Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 1:34 AM
Phyllis thank you for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian
Brown Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Beautiful Haiku Phyllis. I enjoyed it. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Serenity indeed, Phyllis. You give the reader a portrait of nature's beautiful "stillness." Quite a sight to behold. Great work. Love, Carolyn
Pickett Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 10:15 AM
Excellent haiku... Keep up the good work....:JP]
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