Serenity

Listen to the water as it flows harmonically over rocks methodically I'm in a symphony. In the mist of mother natures grandest imagery. Jared Pickett 10/24/09 Asavvy1

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2009 12:05:00 PM

It is a beautiful day here in my life. I am enjoying reading the poetry of my wonderful poet friends here at the Soup. Thank you Jared. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/24/2009 11:23:00 PM

Elegant imagery, nice work...Raul

Date: 10/24/2009 2:22:00 PM

So much truth in your words. I always find being by the water so peaceful so I can really relate to your words. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen

John Freeman

Date: 10/24/2009 11:27:00 AM

Even a well as man has done musical symphony, there still is none more soothing as what nature can provide, Jared! Smile, Sincerely, Moses Thanks for any and all your comments. Very good to hear from you again, How are yo?

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 10/24/2009 10:39:00 AM

great job! this really puts an image in one's mind :) keep going! ------Ell