Serenity

Listen to the water
as it flows harmonically
over rocks methodically
I'm in a symphony.
In the mist of mother natures 
grandest imagery.


Jared Pickett
10/24/09
Asavvy1

naturefree verse

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Carol Sunshine Brown

October 25, 2009 at 12:05 PM

It is a beautiful day here in my life. I am enjoying reading the poetry of my wonderful poet friends here at the Soup. Thank you Jared. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

October 24, 2009 at 11:23 PM

Elegant imagery, nice work...Raul

October 24, 2009 at 2:22 PM

So much truth in your words. I always find being by the water so peaceful so I can really relate to your words. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen

John Freeman

October 24, 2009 at 11:27 AM

Even a well as man has done musical symphony, there still is none more soothing as what nature can provide, Jared! Smile, Sincerely, Moses Thanks for any and all your comments. Very good to hear from you again, How are yo?