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Serene Sundown Glow

 Sun sinks, sky spurs to plum

Day waning, night quaint glum

Faint clouds, setting blazing

Time hands squirm in mud string

Birds in shape, flying low.

Their bright amber eyes glow.



Written: August 17, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly August 20, 2021 at 5:37 AM I love poetry that is inspired by beautiful photographs...Good luck in contest

Supraja Kannan August 19, 2021 at 1:04 AM What a beautiful poetry... Reads like a winner... Sotto Poet August 19, 2021 at 8:34 AM Thank you very much Supraja, appreciate your kind words, and comment.

Harry Horsman August 18, 2021 at 9:55 PM Image inspiration this poetry sure is. Love the colour of your words, even without the image, this reader would have journeyed there upon each and every word. Sotto Poet August 19, 2021 at 8:33 AM Thank you very much, Harry, your delightful words are uplifting to me, and I appreciate your kindness and deep insight.

Vijay Pandit August 18, 2021 at 6:24 AM Much delight in your colors of sunset, Lasaad. Charming images glow in amber eventide. All the best to you. Sotto Poet August 18, 2021 at 6:52 AM Thank you very much, Vijay; your kind words are so motivating and appreciated, have a wonderful day, my friend.

David Kavanagh August 18, 2021 at 6:09 AM Imagery is second to none Lasaad, and what a line to finish with, fires the imagination without thinking, it’s that clear, Must be a big contender for the contest, cheers David Sotto Poet August 18, 2021 at 6:57 AM Thank you very much, David, your words are so much uplifting to me, and I appreciate your great support. Have a wonderful day, my good friend

Heidi Sands August 18, 2021 at 5:00 AM This is so beautiful and peaceful :) Sotto Poet August 18, 2021 at 6:58 AM Thanks, Heidi, appreciate your comment.

Caren Krutsinger August 18, 2021 at 2:42 AM Your imagery is almost unimaginable; I think you will do well in any contest with this beauty. Sotto Poet August 18, 2021 at 7:00 AM Appreciate your wonderful comment, Carren, and your motivating words. Have a Blessed day

Victor Buhagiar August 18, 2021 at 1:34 AM I love sunsets. Somehow they always inspire me. Sotto Poet August 18, 2021 at 7:01 AM Thank you so much, Victor; I love sunsets, too, as they are always thought-provoking and inspiring.

Delice Arleen Skelly August 17, 2021 at 10:40 PM I had never heard of this form, but like yourself I enjoyed the challenge. Well done Lasaad....Delice Sotto Poet August 18, 2021 at 7:10 AM The verse is the form used in this contest, Delice, and thank you so much for your kind comment. Have a great day

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 17, 2021 at 8:19 PM I'd love to see a sunset just as the one described in this gorgeous poem, Lasaad. So well done! Blessings. Sotto Poet August 18, 2021 at 7:12 AM Thank you very much, Evelyn. Sunsets are so inspiring to me too. Have a great day.

Beryl Edmonds August 17, 2021 at 4:29 PM There’s nothing as spectacular as a serene sundown glow and your poem expresses the evening show perfectly. All the best Lasaad…Belle Sotto Poet August 17, 2021 at 5:48 PM Thank you so much, Belle, your so kind and sweet words send some uplifting rays to my heart, and it's very appreciated.

Darlene De Beaulieu August 17, 2021 at 3:14 PM Hello Tayeb, this is a beautiful sunset. I could watch it for hours. blessing my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu August 18, 2021 at 10:21 AM Hello Tayeb, Yes thankyou my day is going well. . Enjoy your day my friend. Sotto Poet August 17, 2021 at 3:19 PM Hi, Darlene, I hope your day is going well. Thank you so much for your delightful comment.