Serene Evening

Have you ever wished to be able to capture a moment?
Not by the aid of photography
But by capturing and saving it in the memory that never gets full
For when you want to relive it you can just think about it
Then like a scene taken out from a fairytale
The scenery from that one moment captured in time can materialize
Like opening a wonderland door beaming in anticipation 
Of once again getting lost in a world so tranquil 
Away from the chaos that’s behind the door

Woke up drunk and groggy from a habitual long day’s nap
The sun was just setting
Longing to take in earth’s air
After being cooped up in the house all day
I strolled to the front door

Like a norm, always having me weak on my knees
Once again mother-nature didn’t fail me
I could smell it, taste it, hear it and feel it
The earthy breeze that greeted me at the door
It enticed me to step outside as if it were a host welcoming his guests in his humble home
I felt one with the wind as it caressed my florid cheeks and stroke my hair
So much tenderness and delicacy in its caress

Far into the distance in the heart of the city the faint sound of cars can be heard
Synchronized with the sway of leaves as they danced with the howling wind
And the chirping of crickets 
A sweet serene and compelling melody was created
Face to face with the hypnosis
I let it all go and succumbed to the alluring siren like melody
I was ready to be a prisoner to such phenomenon

As I elegantly drifted around the compound
Swaying with the evening breeze
I never thought the evening could get any better than it were already is
I looked up to the sky still dimly lit by the last rays of the setting sun
It now wore its priceless evening jewelry 
That flicked and sparkled as they blushed from my undiverted admiration gaze
I then saw them
In awe, for a brief moment in time it was like the earth came to a halt
Gosh I’d even forgot to breath for a split second
For my eyes were graced by such beautiful splendor

It hanged up there so majestically like a king amongst his followers
Though slim and incomplete its dominating illumination was intimidating
By its side was his loyal companion 
He stood there with an angelic outline and captivating radiance oozing from him
It was the two evening princes ;the crescent moon and the star
Such a sight to see aint it
Now wouldn’t you agree with me when I say moments like this should be captured in memories that we can relive whenever we want with the indulgence of all our five senses?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/8/2020 4:04:00 PM
You captured me Rercy, I normally prefer shorter pieces but your narration held me all the way. Excellent...
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Rercy Zola-Zaba
Date: 4/9/2020 1:19:00 PM
I am glad Charlie.Kind wishes!
Date: 4/8/2020 5:18:00 AM
Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai
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Rercy Zola-Zaba
Date: 4/9/2020 1:18:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment Kai!
Date: 4/6/2020 7:42:00 PM
I agree with this wish - to recall totally a beautiful moment of nature, a loving face from the past, an event that changed the trajectory of our life. You describe all the senses so lavishly. There is a certain smell that instantly recalls me beloved grandmother who died 32 years ago. When I smell it, I close my eyes and sense into the beautiful soul she was. Your images of the evening sky are delightful - "It now wore its priceless evening jewelry". Thank you for this poetic treat ~ John
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Rercy Zola-Zaba
Date: 4/7/2020 1:01:00 PM
I am sure your grandmother brags about you on the other-side for she is lucky to had a grandson who forever holds her dearly in heart. Your lovely words are music to my ears, kind words like yours are my inspiration to write and share with the world, I am humbled:D
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