Serendipity

who can predict, which water lily blooms - her glance meets mine
 
                                     18 Jan 2016
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Roper Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 6:44 PM
Well done, David. Congratulations on your 1 liner poem . Hugs Eve ~`*
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January 9, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Wow David!! Such a great monoku! Congrats on your win!!! ~Judy
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 6:13 PM
OMG, this is AMAZING. FAVE
Leiser Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Very clever and insightful poem, David. Enjoyed. :)
Babu Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Many Congratulations on this TOP Win:-) Regards, Sathya
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:35 PM
- Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, David :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:04 PM
I love this David! Congratulations! I am so happy to see this poem take top honors! : )
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:08 AM
Congrats on your beautiful monoku, David.
Talbot Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 10:53 AM
A perfect monoku! Congratulations, on your win!
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January 6, 2018 at 9:18 AM
Wonderful Monoku! Congratulations on your win David :) xomo!
One Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:00 AM
And what a glance that would have been... Congratulations on your first place in the cliche monoku contest David..
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 7:40 PM
glad to see this one higher on the list. I really like it. Congrats.
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January 26, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Hi DAVID, CONGRATULATIONS, on your monoku #2 win. xox ** SKAT **
Selfa Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Perfectly done David! :) Congratulations. -hans
A. Sharma Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 2:37 AM
Wow David so lovely.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!!
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January 24, 2016 at 9:08 PM
DAVID, CONGRATS on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "I Can't Sleep" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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January 24, 2016 at 9:11 AM
- Lovely, David :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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