Serendipitously

As you peruse stacks of old photographs,
sentimental tears guide your memories.
Drowning in a sea of yesterdays, you
serendipitously find Mom's letters.
In your rush to grow up and leave home, her
advice was met with frustration, and yet
without protest, she swallowed her pride and
applauded every milestone you achieved.
Time takes you back to when she last held you;
stirring emotions you forgot you had.
You never told her that you loved her, and
questioning your heart, you begin to cry.
Isn't it weird how much you miss her talks now?
Alone, you deal with the hurt you're feeling
by garnering love from a broken heart.


(2nd Letter Acrostic spelling “Serendipitously”)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/25/2018 3:22:00 PM
Beautiful nostalgic poem about dealing with the guilt of maternal love taken for granted once it's too late. All that's left are memories and old photos. I love that the acrostic is with the 2nd letter of each word. First time I see this variation of the form. Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/25/2018 5:51:00 PM
Thanks Line, all of your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/23/2015 6:14:00 AM
Hi Emile...this is so touching...'You never miss the water till the well runs dry'. Blessings!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/23/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Grace, your visit is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/23/2015 3:25:00 AM
a very fine acrostic poem Emile hugs 7
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Date: 4/23/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, your visits are appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/22/2015 11:48:00 PM
this is not only heart wrenching, but a VERY clever poem, the way you used your acrostic with the second letter in each line. VERY unique!! This is a FAVE for me.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/23/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea, your visit is much appreciated. Emile.
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/22/2015 11:53:00 PM
Oh I just noticed this after reading your comment. The acrostic with the second letter. How awesome.
Date: 4/22/2015 9:49:00 PM
Nothing in the world compares to mother's love. This is so sweetly sentimental...A #7
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Date: 4/23/2015 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Nandita, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/22/2015 5:53:00 PM
simply sensational - love the way you have crafted this Emile:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 4/22/2015 6:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 4/22/2015 5:28:00 PM
This is tremendous my friend...a 7 Tim
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Date: 4/22/2015 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Tim, your comments are always appreciated. Emile.
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