JC Brul Poet Sijo

Serenade

As night defeats the day, your guitar I hear strumming softly ;
     Could it be true, angels descend from heaven to sing love songs? 
     I rise and run to chase the rhythm, alas, it fades away!



       2ND PLACE            
Let the Pens Flow - Sijo
Contest Judged:  6/11/2020 12:47:00 PM
Sponsored by: Jenish Somada

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Sara Kendrick October 15, 2021 at 1:53 PM I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara

William Kelii Kekaula October 14, 2021 at 12:11 AM Our senses are a delicate source of inner depths that's tangent to hope prior to realities awakenings! Nicely done my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 6:45 PM back with my congrats. Even seeing all the winnes to this point, yours remains one of my top favorites.

Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 6:58 AM Oh this takes my heart away in a second! Love the soothing sensation your words give. This is beautiful and a fave. Congratulations on your win :) Much love and blessings

Jenish Somadas June 12, 2020 at 1:00 AM Congratulations Burl.. The flow of words and the little twist, you did exceptionally well.. JC Brul June 12, 2020 at 1:31 AM Thank you for your appreciation dear poet Jenish! and for the placement you gave to this humble poem.

John Watt June 11, 2020 at 11:55 PM I do tend to love poetry about music, and I'm very fond of this one, JCB. Congratulations on your win ~ John

Kim Rodrigues May 29, 2020 at 9:45 PM Beautiful!

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2020 at 5:24 PM wow, I like this one a LOT. And you got that great twist at the end that a sijo requires.Excellent work.

Jc Hawkens May 28, 2020 at 5:03 AM Sometimes I do believe that Angel's descend from Heaven. Simply stunning! Beautiful expression.

Gershon Wolf May 26, 2020 at 3:41 PM Ooh. A soul rising from the tomb... Ooh... Eerie stuff. Enjoyed the sijo, JCB. Cheers, Gershon

Arturo Michael May 26, 2020 at 8:39 AM The places you travel between sleep and wake...you may never know...Nice one

Debjani Mitra May 25, 2020 at 9:31 PM Ah this is so dreamy...how poems should be..loved it ...best wishes for the contest..you motivated me JC Brul May 25, 2020 at 9:35 PM Thank you so much dear poet Debjani for a heart-warming inspiring comment. More power on your pen.