Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

Sequidilla No 1

No one about, the rain on
cobblestones glistened.
Scavenging cat stalked close by
l stopped and listened. 
Pain pierced my heart.
I was standing , where we had
decided to part.


Contest: Sequidilla by Nette Onclaud

                 I used number1

Penned 14 September 2017

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Arthur Vaso September 15, 2017 at 9:24 PM Now that I brought the limes!!!, this is a fav seren, loved this poem.

Jan Allison September 15, 2017 at 5:51 PM a lovely interpretation of the image Seren:-) good luck in the contest:-0 hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley September 14, 2017 at 8:44 PM A wonderful write Seren. Lovely and tender. Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest! Seren Roberts September 15, 2017 at 3:15 AM Thank u Susan....Seren

Russell Sivey September 14, 2017 at 1:15 PM What a brilliantly, well-written write! A sad poem, but I loved it! You created a grandiose piece from that picture Nette had on the contest page, awesome inspiration! I really enjoyed reading your delightful poem here this afternoon! What a powerful piece, Great Work!! Seren Roberts September 15, 2017 at 3:15 AM Hi Russell you are so kind....Seren

Tim Smith September 14, 2017 at 11:55 AM I'm inquiring about the tequila...you must have misspelled the sign out front...seriously...great poem Seren Roberts September 15, 2017 at 3:18 AM Sorry no Tequilla forgot to buy limes....Seren