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Sequence-Time Stands Still

Thin
spires
in the breeze-
tasselled teasels
touch

bells
tolling
in the wind-
old memories-
die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 7:09 PM
your title reflects nicely in this art! Brian!... jim
Pickett Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 11:24 AM
This was a lovely poem Brian......:JP]
Richards Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 8:03 AM
Softly melancholy this one feels....lovely and rather sad. ~ Nicely done. Love, Carrie
Kendrick Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 4:18 AM
Will they come to life again? Keep writing Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
George   Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 1:33 AM
What a vivid picure you paint with this one, Brian. lainie
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