Brian Strand Poet Monoku

Sequence-See Saw

Sometimes I think-
                       sometimes I am
Oftimes I dream-
                        more often I plan
In the spur of the moment-
                        catch,as catch can
My heart rules my head-
                        and fearless I shed
Reticence,buried deep-
                       in impetuosity,I leap
Waiting...I.., I....t .. h .. i .. n...k..? -
                       inhibits......I am

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Doris Culverhouse December 7, 2009 at 5:16 AM good one, I like a little spontaneity!!

Elaine George December 6, 2009 at 5:19 PM The many layers of who we are. Fastinating poem and blog, Brian. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 6, 2009 at 4:57 AM Luv this one Brian.. just read your blog too and I see your thought pattern here... great words to draw the reader to want more... will comment on blog also.. excellent info on it... always... happy Sunday with blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire December 6, 2009 at 12:51 AM Interesting perspective in this write, Brian. We have heard the quote, "I think, therefore I am." But if I am reading this correctly, perhaps we sometimes think too much and fail to enjoy each moment of our lives. Very intriguing concepts. Love, Carolyn