Brian Strand Poet Lanterne

Sequence-Ruach

When
you rest
upon me-
your heart I can
see
When
you rest
upon me-
I can bend the
knee
When
you rest
upon me-
then I can be
free
When
you rest
upon me-
then I can be
me
When
you rest
upon me-
close am I to
thee
Then
your word
I can say-
in another
way

Inspired by Num 11:24/24 & 29

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Inkstain Thepoet November 11, 2009 at 9:32 AM I just utterly adore your poem dedicated to religion. They are powerful. Loved this poem and I feel like I really don't have to tell you to continue writing as I can see your pen is always on the move. Nice write Brian.

Marty Owens November 8, 2009 at 8:14 PM Very Nice, enjoyed reading...Marty

Elaine George November 5, 2009 at 6:08 PM Rauch (Spirit, wind, breath). Sayeth Moses "I wish that all the Lord's people were profits and that the Lord would put his spiit on them. BRILLIANT PIECE! Brian. Lainie

Sara Kendrick November 5, 2009 at 3:28 PM Inspiring write. Keep writing. Sara

Carrie Richards November 5, 2009 at 7:26 AM Inspirational, and a wonderful read to begin my morning. Lovely words to live by. ~ Carrie