Sequence-Rain Down

Clouds
of fire
fall anew,
change again my
view-
Clouds
of fire
set me free,
giving gifts to
me-
Clouds
of fire
speak each day,
show me what to
do-
Clouds
of fire
lead me on,
'til this walk is
done.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 6:25 AM
well you got me wondering? What causes a cloud to be made of fire? The A bomb? I wouldn't have gotten God out of this but I more than willing to listen? Light & Love Soupmail me
Johnson Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 10:41 AM
I need to practice this form. It is impressive when you do it. Thank you for your comment on my featured poem. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 8:45 AM
Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Brian. Enjoyed this read. Love, Carol
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November 1, 2009 at 8:13 AM
Beautiful Brian ... and I can relate today.. its been raining in N.J. for 3 days now.. and this poem gives one much reflection to consider... great write.. keep at it... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry also and for welcoming me so warmly to the Soup... am having a blast!! Linda-Marie
Jordan Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 8:07 AM
Brian my good friend this is a wonderful Sunday morning poem I must say - Just wanted to stop in a say hello - God Bless, mj
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November 1, 2009 at 7:30 AM
Amazing image tied to a brilliant message, Brian! Surely an awesome lanterne. Love, Carolyn
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November 1, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Beautiful testimony to your faith, Brain...nice way to start off s Sunday - Tim
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 3:04 AM
Yes, fill me daily with the cloven tongues of fire. Love the approach to the topic. Keep writing. Sara
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