Sequence-Perceptions

which
is sea,
which is sky-
do horizons 
lie?

as
I move,
it moves too,
etched a deeper
blue

should 
I stop,
change about,
find another
route ?

can
I gain
certainty-
who will set me
free

sky
or sea,
onwards let
my horizons
be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mcnaughton Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 2:21 PM
Thankyou very much for your comments tooday Brian, I enjoy reading your poetry very much. Kate. x
Haick Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 9:25 AM
Memorable sequence, Brian! I am amazed at your work! This is challenging. Peace, audrey
Richards Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 7:57 AM
Love this sequence, and the mystery it seems to hold...the seaching we all do! Looking for our own horizons....nice!!! PS. Congratulations once again for your winning poem in the Poetry Soup Contest!!! Excellent!! _love, Carrie
Gass Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 4:44 AM
Lovely and thought provoking Fibinacci sequence, Brian! I especially love the last lines. Love, Robin
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 4:12 AM
Unusual style fibonacci. Keep writing. Sara
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