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Sequence-Once Burnt

Can
time
assuage
broken hearts-
and ignite
passion
once
more
or
will
despair
overwhelm
forever,
stifling-
love's
flame

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Carolyn Devonshire

February 13, 2009 at 12:34 PM

Brian, time can mend broken hearts...over and over again. Nice job! Carolyn

Kristin Reynolds

February 13, 2009 at 2:30 AM

Truthfully, it could ge either way, most of the time...out. very sad, love, Kristin

Carrie Richards

February 12, 2009 at 1:14 PM

Great form, great age-old question! I should like to think the heart can, and evenutally would, recover. Carrie

Michael Jordan

February 12, 2009 at 6:45 AM

I reckon thats about the hardest call we face in life - I do horribly when alone with a broken heart - God Bless, MJ

Sharon Winter

February 12, 2009 at 6:33 AM

A beautiful Fibonacci with a question to ponder. I suppose it depends on how deep the wounds are, however I remain optimistic and hopeful that time shall heal. Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass

February 12, 2009 at 6:14 AM

This is beautiful, Brian, in both form and sentiment. I believe it can. With time, we heal. With Christ in your heart there is always love there and it is easy to love. Great write, Brian