Sequence-Graduation Ball

footsteps in the street- 
                              echos of distant youth
the fridge motor hums-
                              night starvation comes home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 1:55 PM
When we were young that hunger and appetite was always calling..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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March 8, 2010 at 5:12 AM
We can all reflect on our distant youth, especially if it was a great time in life for us.. and your last two lines bring the reality of it all home.... enjoyed Brian..luv.. Linda-Marie
Arteaga Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 12:14 AM
yes yes, to excited or who knows what happened at the dance that you didn't touch a thing to snack on! obviously way to many thing happen. very nice monoku, i didn't have a ball but makes me think of related things.
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