Sequence-Fall

Dahlia petals on the lawn,
dew-sodden in the October dawn

Michelmas daisies,limp and old
amidst faded leaves,now spotted gold

Bright bonfire-coloured leaves all aglow,
in Acer Palmantum's Autumn show.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Buys Avatar
September 9, 2008 at 2:22 PM
A beautiful visual poem. Very vivid images. Good one. Regards Heidie
Winter Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 10:29 AM
Every season has it's beauty. You painted this one brilliant. Love, Shar
Babcock Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 10:16 AM
I just hate it when fall comes and the beautiful flowers start to die. I know it is the start of another long cold winter. Great write Brian. God Bless Phyl
Richards Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 9:49 AM
You painted beautiful autumn colors with your poem! Enjoyable to read!....~Carrie
Reynolds Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 4:19 AM
You have autumn on a string here, Brian - a colourful, crystalline string of fall. Loved loved this! So visually stunning, love Kristin
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