Sequence Weekend Walk

Along 
a footpath,
into a wood
upon a bridleway-
across
hillock
coppices
common and coombe-
free to roam with plenty 
of room
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 24, 2008 at 12:59 PM
Ahhh, nothing like a scenic walk, I'm not sure what I'd do, if I could not emerse myself within nature. beautiful, Brian, love, Kristin
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November 24, 2008 at 8:25 AM
but the computer keeps showing me server error I dont know what that is anyways have a warm thnksgiving I dont know if you celebrate that forgive my ignorance and if you dont have a wonderful week with you and your family. God bless you my dear friend. Michael Torres
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November 24, 2008 at 8:23 AM
Brian here in NY we have an area called Montenzuma wild life refuge it is a migratory area where birds fly from the north to the south for the winter. This poem reminds me when Janice and I visited there it is so beautiful all the wildlife and pathways around there habitate, excellent write Brian. I wanted to remove the last poem you commented on it was fiction and not a reflection of myself. I wanted to reach those in touble but after writing it I thought it was too graphic. I have tried to
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November 24, 2008 at 8:02 AM
I'm an avid walker, so this really sounds delightful to me! Nicely done! Enjoy your beautiful surroundings..they sound lovely! :) ~ Carrie
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