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again
cold season,
another year went by,
some more grey hair,
oh life !


oh life,
oh sorrow,
let my soul breath. 
oh cold reality,
oh life!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 11:20 AM
my feelings EXACTLY. Congrats. I really liked your entry in this contest.
Rahim Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Andrea, thank you for reading it. I appreciate your comment.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Congratulations on your win Goran
Rahim Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Thank you Brenda
A. Sharma Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 5:03 AM
That's true wid life for each one of us! So true,,Congrats on ur win!
Rahim Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:34 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma
Callus Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 10:56 AM
That's life for you (and all of us) Goran!! Cold reality, indeed! Congrats on your win. // paul
Rahim Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:34 AM
Thank you Paul, its unwanted reality :)
Allison Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 8:19 AM
ohhhh I love greying men lol - great write :-) Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
Rahim Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:35 AM
Thank you Jan, hugs
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 5:45 AM
I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,Goran
Rahim Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:37 AM
Dr Mehta thank you very much for giving a position to this poem, it makes me try harder to write better. thank you again sir
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