Sequence

again cold season, another year went by, some more grey hair, oh life ! oh life, oh sorrow, let my soul breath. oh cold reality, oh life!

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Date: 12/14/2014 11:20:00 AM

my feelings EXACTLY. Congrats. I really liked your entry in this contest.

Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:33:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for reading it. I appreciate your comment.

Date: 12/11/2014 9:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Goran

Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:33:00 AM

Thank you Brenda

Date: 12/11/2014 5:03:00 AM

That's true wid life for each one of us! So true,,Congrats on ur win!

Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:34:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma

Date: 12/10/2014 10:56:00 AM

That's life for you (and all of us) Goran!! Cold reality, indeed! Congrats on your win. // paul

Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:34:00 AM

Thank you Paul, its unwanted reality :)

Date: 12/10/2014 8:19:00 AM

ohhhh I love greying men lol - great write :-) Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx

Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:35:00 AM

Thank you Jan, hugs

Date: 12/10/2014 5:45:00 AM

I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,Goran

Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:37:00 AM

Dr Mehta thank you very much for giving a position to this poem, it makes me try harder to write better. thank you again sir