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again
cold season,
another year went by,
some more grey hair,
oh life !


oh life,
oh sorrow,
let my soul breath. 
oh cold reality,
oh life!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/14/2014 11:20:00 AM
my feelings EXACTLY. Congrats. I really liked your entry in this contest.
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Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:33:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for reading it. I appreciate your comment.
Date: 12/11/2014 9:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Goran
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Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:33:00 AM
Thank you Brenda
Date: 12/11/2014 5:03:00 AM
That's true wid life for each one of us! So true,,Congrats on ur win!
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Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:34:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma
Date: 12/10/2014 10:56:00 AM
That's life for you (and all of us) Goran!! Cold reality, indeed! Congrats on your win. // paul
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Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:34:00 AM
Thank you Paul, its unwanted reality :)
Date: 12/10/2014 8:19:00 AM
ohhhh I love greying men lol - great write :-) Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:35:00 AM
Thank you Jan, hugs
Date: 12/10/2014 5:45:00 AM
I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,Goran
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Goran Rahim
Date: 12/16/2014 12:37:00 AM
Dr Mehta thank you very much for giving a position to this poem, it makes me try harder to write better. thank you again sir
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