Nette Onclaud Poet Cinqku

Sequence

Parols
wrapped in gold ,
adorn a church
like tiaras forming
Starlight

Blessings
flame lanterns,
kindling year's dreams
as Manger Babe ushers
Christmas!



Dr. Ram Mehta's Cingku Poem: 2/3/4/6/2
by nette onclaud
11/11/2014

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Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2014 at 11:04 AM This is wonderful. I just viewed all your winners and love them so much. Thanks for putting me on that list. Congrats for your high score with this one.

Brenda Meier-Hans December 11, 2014 at 5:32 PM Congratulations on your win Nette. Very beautifully written with so few words.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 11, 2014 at 3:44 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Nette! Merry Christmas!

Eve Roper December 10, 2014 at 9:19 AM Nette, congratulations on a first place win. Blessings

Sandra Haight December 10, 2014 at 9:18 AM Congratulations on your win for this beautiful Cinqku, Nette. Your words envoke the blessed and soothing spirit of real Christmas. Hugs, Sanddra

Paul Callus December 10, 2014 at 9:02 AM This is a worthy winner for the festive season, Nette. May you have a very happy Christmas! Congratulations. // paul

Abdul Malik Mandani December 10, 2014 at 8:15 AM "as Manger Babe ushers Christmas!" is the clincher! Very nicely done. Congrats.

Jan Allison December 10, 2014 at 5:45 AM many congrats Nette:-) Hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta December 10, 2014 at 5:22 AM I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win, nette

Kayod5 Kayode November 12, 2014 at 9:12 AM It is Xmas season and I trust you to reel out the best; I am not surprised at this, knowing fully well the stuff you are made of.For sure this is a winner and I will surely come back to congratulate you. Huggs

Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2014 at 2:40 AM Excellent. Very descriptive and expressive write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 12, 2014 at 2:02 AM WOW!!! who else can do this other Nette.. :)! just lovely as you are.. :)! soupmail! miss you hugs.. :D

Carrie Richards November 11, 2014 at 8:07 PM I feel the sense of softness, and the true meaning of Christmas. Wow.....lovely!

Sara Kendrick November 11, 2014 at 12:22 PM Very descriptive and expressive..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen November 11, 2014 at 10:56 AM - A charming poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - Have a nice afternoon - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison November 11, 2014 at 10:29 AM so beautiful Nette! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Manny Paras November 11, 2014 at 10:12 AM Nette, you share the joy of celebrating a special holiday with you lit poem, and in the end the promise of life's cheer from a baby in the manger!

Manny Paras November 11, 2014 at 10:12 AM Nette, you share the joy of celebrating a special holiday with you lit poem, and in the end the promise of life's cheer from a baby in the manger!

Ashley Conte November 11, 2014 at 9:57 AM A lantern of stars is a holiday's most shining charm.Exceptional poem for the coming season!.. huggs