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Christmas memories lost in frail mind. His family are strangers - eyes blank. Boyish thoughts of yore, Grandpa pretends, returns hugs with anxious smile – lonely. for Dr. Ram's Cinqku Contest, 11/9/2014

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/12/2014 11:55:00 AM

Beautiful...and yet so sad; very good take for this sequence contest. well done, Rhonda! // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/10/2014 2:45:00 AM

Very sad subject to write upon it but well written Rhonda. Powerful cinqku. GL in the contest! :) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/10/2014 1:23:00 AM

Excellent execution of this form. It is sad to outlive your wit. Again I believe this will do very well in the challenge.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2014 11:48:00 PM

so sad, and it is such a true fact of life for many. You chose a really good way to do the theme!!