Sequence

drunk thoughts
dreamy smiles
party chuckles
sublime - timelessness
real fun

mountains
cool shadows
flowing clouds, winds
reflections - still waters
healed souls


Date: 8.11.2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Blown Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 2:58 AM
drunk on thought....wowza….nice phrase …..welcome to the poetry quarters..... mmmmahahahaa…..just kidding : ) stan
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Congrats, MOhan. Glad to finally read your poem.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mohan
A. Sharma Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 3:53 AM
Congrats on ur top place win wid this awesome write Mohan!
Callus Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Lovely poem and contrasting images between first and second stanzas. #7 Congrats on being awarded first place in this contest. // paul
Allison Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 5:46 AM
dropping back with my congrats Mohan:-) Hugs jan x
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 5:26 AM
I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win, Mohanji
Allison Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:33 AM
beautifully penned Mohan good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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