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enjoy together family time delicious food, laughter alone all gone solitude meager fare left soon they'll come home again delight Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Cinqku Poem Date: November 07, 2014 Theme: Holidays

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2014 11:11:00 AM

Big congrats, Sara. Glad to see this on the winners' list.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/11/2014 8:27:00 PM

Coming home is always such a delight for everyone. Congratulations on your win Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/11/2014 4:38:00 AM

Wow Sara lovely delightful write my friend! Congrats on big win!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2014 9:42:00 AM

Such a lovely poem Sara! Togetherness brings warm and delightful feelings; special days and holidays contribute to make this possible. Congratulations on a deserved top placing. May you enjoy this coming Christmas! // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/10/2014 9:23:00 AM

Hi Sara, I really enjoyed your Cinqku. If flowed beautifully. Your words certainly echo my feelings of having a family get-together for any holiday! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2014 5:53:00 AM

many congrats sara:-) Hugs jan x

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2014 5:35:00 AM

I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/8/2014 4:03:00 AM

Wonderful take Sara! good that u enjoy togetherness, lovely contrast in both stanzas, love the second one full of hope for next meet! Gl in contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/7/2014 12:12:00 PM

love the contrast in the two stanzas good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

David Meade

Date: 11/7/2014 9:19:00 AM

Another gem -- family gatherings are sweet and complicated, joyful and ruckus, and fun and work . . . what would we do without them . . . great poem