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enjoy together family time delicious food, laughter alone all gone solitude meager fare left soon they'll come home again delight
Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Cinqku Poem Date: November 07, 2014 Theme: Holidays
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Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Big congrats, Sara. Glad to see this on the winners' list.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 8:27 PM
Coming home is always such a delight for everyone. Congratulations on your win Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 4:38 AM
Wow Sara lovely delightful write my friend! Congrats on big win!
Callus Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 9:42 AM
Such a lovely poem Sara! Togetherness brings warm and delightful feelings; special days and holidays contribute to make this possible. Congratulations on a deserved top placing. May you enjoy this coming Christmas! // paul
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Hi Sara, I really enjoyed your Cinqku. If flowed beautifully. Your words certainly echo my feelings of having a family get-together for any holiday! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 5:53 AM
many congrats sara:-) Hugs jan x
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 5:35 AM
I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 4:03 AM
Wonderful take Sara! good that u enjoy togetherness, lovely contrast in both stanzas, love the second one full of hope for next meet! Gl in contest!
Allison Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 12:12 PM
love the contrast in the two stanzas good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Meade Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Another gem -- family gatherings are sweet and complicated, joyful and ruckus, and fun and work . . . what would we do without them . . . great poem
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