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Sequence-Time Stood Still

just for a moment nothing mattered-
                                                 in the silence,quietness stirs
impressions of summer-
                               whisper in the breeze

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Sharon Winter Date: 11/30/2009 9:13:00 AM Heavenly mood here Brian, I sense it deeply. Warmest thanks for your thoughtful congrats. You are never far away from me in spirit. Hugs for you, shar xoxo Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 11/28/2009 6:19:00 PM Very Nice...Enjoyed...Marty Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/28/2009 1:15:00 PM Nicely penned in a few words that are very descriptive and expressive. Thanks for answers about your meal. Still do not know if there is a meat that you can compare mutton. Thank you for the comments on my work. I may enter my Acrostic in the contest since it doesnt' have to rhyme. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 11/28/2009 12:07:00 PM Awesome Monoku, fall is my time of the year, with the mild temp. just befor winter sets in.Sincerely, Moses Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 11/28/2009 5:27:00 AM gentle, soft feel, nice! Brian! jimbo Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/28/2009 5:26:00 AM Well its absolutely frigid here in New Jersey today so I am enjoying the warmth of your Monoku this morning... luv those summer breezes that whisper... enjoyed.... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/28/2009 12:59:00 AM i wish the time stood still,i wish for summer,that sweet whisper in the breeze..A GEM--Charma Login to Reply