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sequence-TEMPTATION

apples overhang the orchard wall, sun-kissed drapes now about to fall. hedgerows ablaze with succulent sweets will-power melts in a crumble inspired by Constance's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/11/2010 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Brian. Love,Carol
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Date: 1/11/2010 12:22:00 AM
Brian, this is Crystalline poetry at its finest. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/26/2009 9:25:00 PM
Excellent! Vivid powerful images. Elaine
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Date: 11/26/2009 5:16:00 AM
I was enthralled reading this one... good luck in Constance's contest Anything Goes.. I also have entered with my Musical Melodies taking a trip down the light fantastic .. keep sharing these wonderful creations with us all... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/26/2009 3:16:00 AM
beautiful,.,going to my favs.. a masterpiece--Charma
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Date: 11/25/2009 10:18:00 AM
Thanksgiving images.....C'mon man, we have less than 24 hours... The temptation is overbearing.....:JP]
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Date: 11/25/2009 9:58:00 AM
Mmmmmm makes me think of apple crumble. Your making me hungry Brian. Have a great day. God Bless Phyl
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