Sequence-Temptation

apples overhang the orchard wall,
sun-kissed drapes now about to fall.

hedgerows ablaze with succulent sweets
will-power melts in a crumble


inspired by Constance's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Brian. Love,Carol
George   Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 12:22 AM
Brian, this is Crystalline poetry at its finest. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Love, Lainie
George   Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 9:25 PM
Excellent! Vivid powerful images. Elaine
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November 26, 2009 at 5:16 AM
I was enthralled reading this one... good luck in Constance's contest Anything Goes.. I also have entered with my Musical Melodies taking a trip down the light fantastic .. keep sharing these wonderful creations with us all... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart"
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November 26, 2009 at 3:16 AM
beautiful,.,going to my favs.. a masterpiece--Charma
Pickett Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 10:18 AM
Thanksgiving images.....C'mon man, we have less than 24 hours... The temptation is overbearing.....:JP]
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November 25, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Mmmmmm makes me think of apple crumble. Your making me hungry Brian. Have a great day. God Bless Phyl
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