Sequence-Mood Change
Grey
clouds
above-
the sunshine
hides 'neath the duvet..
so,
so
tired
ebbs the tide..
of enertia:
a
call,
a word
in season-
flowers deep within
and
hope
alights
again on
optimism's tree.
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