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sequence-LEGACY

Our
fragrance
lingers on
within those we
rear,
sweet
smelling,
if in God we
fear-
and
above
hovering,
blessing as a
dove,
our
bios
dissipates-
into those we
love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/20/2009 7:29:00 AM
Continuity ... poets call it flow ... lovers call it "my" ... an existential urge in the poet ... echoing.
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Date: 5/17/2009 11:53:00 AM
Brian, I love this poem. it's going to my favorites. Sweetness exudes within these words. You have captured the essence of our hope- to live on in the minds of future generations and thus, influence them. Love, DAS-J (PS-Thanks for your contest. Words have been flowing. My goal=365.)
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:55:00 AM
With God's blessing...may be only pass down the best of what we are. Lovely poem, Brain! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:52:00 AM
Wow, i love the trickledown effect, in both lyric and form. I bow to you, Sir Brian. love, Kristin
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Date: 5/17/2009 6:38:00 AM
Aw, truly beautiful. Just love your poetry. Deeply inspirational. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:01:00 AM
so sweet, may the fragrance of Jesus continue to grow through generation to generation, A super write i can smell the beauty in the words like sweet sweet flowers, God bless you from diane
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