Sequel To Topsy Turvy Tomato

Topsy Turvy Tomato
Finally yielded some fruit
I get exercise to boot
For I have to get on my knees
And sometimes lie down to beg please
Release the tomato to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 29, 2009 at 8:56 AM
I quiet like tomatoes, i won't mind you releasing all the tomatoes you can get to me. nice peotry though, very imaginative. Abe
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August 26, 2009 at 5:26 AM
I grew some tomatoes on my balcony last summer, but most had been spoiled after too much rain. Today I am having tomato salad, nice poem on tomatoes, Sara, Love, Gert
Joseph Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 6:07 PM
I can see you out there in the garden! delightful! all our tomatoes drowned in our rainy "summer"
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August 25, 2009 at 6:05 PM
the imperial fruit! nice! jimbo
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August 25, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Oh, how funny! You gave me a great laugh with the image of you begging the tomato plant to release its fruit. Delightful work, Sara! Love, Carolyn
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