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September's Dawn

A shocking September dawn Loss foreseen Imagination, running riot!! A pain realized Heard by all The reflection of red runs deep Through my veins Red forever Pouring agony; defeit This day, this September dawn Her beauty fades....

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2013 11:11:00 PM

Gerri, deep and epic .. -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"