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September Spring

Tui birdsong starts again, melodious warbling bitter southerly wind still bites sleet, horizontal and cold, flattens the daffodils sudden rays of bright warm sunshine race over paddocks vivid green grass juxtaposes clear blue sky Earth warms

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Michelle Morris

Date: 3/8/2023 4:18:00 AM

Lovely imagery. I love flowers and colours. Take care and enjoy your week. :-)

Julie Draper
Date: 3/8/2023 10:39:00 AM

Thanks very much Michelle. Have a great week too :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2022 7:50:00 PM

This is gorgeous poetry, and if I had not been looking more for memories instead of September descriptions, I think it would have got a top placement!

Julie Draper
Date: 9/23/2022 7:57:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. You're absolutely correct, it didn't really fit the brief, but I couldn't help myself and entered it anyway :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/6/2022 11:00:00 AM

It is always good to feel the sunrise on one's skin! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Julie Draper
Date: 9/6/2022 12:33:00 PM

Thank you Rico. Yes, after a long wet winter it's nice to see spring returning here :)