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Written: September 330, 2024 For Edward Ibeh Contest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A brown ribbon-like road with a blue sky. A jungle of green, with the sky peeking high. Asters are velvety rich, as a grasshopper's call. Time flies—today is heat and tomorrow is fall. Do you beguile me erratically, Hope? The day of your birth has just waned. But its white wings are full of scope. With eyes that sang rhapsody, light reigned. Grew bulky and bright and my path was clear. Under their calming beams and smiles, dear... A path going to some guilt-free land. To which a star drops from the nightstand! When did I leave the prisonhouse of clay? My cantankerous spirit will vanish away. We bestow all praise on the eternal elixir of bliss. Oh, don't bury me amid rotting bones diss. Amid a moon icy light, marble slabs shimmer. Where a hapless mourner will always simmer. Upon the graves of those who lie in peace. While basking in the sun on a woodland lease. Indulge in the September and fall faith. September is unlike every other wraith Colors and weather swing over the day. No other month can claim the same way. Season of hazy and luscious ripeness. Loyal ally of the sun as it earns rifeness. Crafting a scheme to load and bless him. Vine-covered thatch-eaves surge, full of vim. Using pears to twist the mossy home trees. And yield every fruit its full, deep bloom breeze. Inflate the squash and cram the hazel seeds. With the tasty kernel, deeper buds will breed. And further, later blooms for the bees. Until they believe warm days will never cease. The summer season has clogged their pores. Who hasn't seen you often in your store?

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Date: 10/17/2024 6:24:00 AM
Outstanding penning, as usual, Lasaad. I wish I could write like you. Your poem is full of striking imagery and I love the flow throughout. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 10/15/2024 10:21:00 AM
What a lovely poem.... ! I have missed many of your poems> There were some unprecedented turns in life that made me turn my focus from poetry. I have to catch up with quite a lot ! Your September rhapsody sings to my heart. The end of summer and the commencement of autumn is beautifully described. September is a month of transition when flowers are still in bloom but sun grows milder and air goes cooler. I particularly loved the opening stanza, beautifully in sync with the image given. Lovely poem. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 10/10/2024 5:09:00 PM
Truly beautiful.... the whole poem enchanted the senses with their rich images... :)
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Date: 10/4/2024 7:38:00 AM
Hey Sotto! Wow, what a real journey through seasons and emotions! I love how you blend nature imagery with deep feelings. That line "We bestow all praise on the eternal elixir of bliss" really hits home. Your well-inked descriptions of September are spot-on, capturing the essence of fall beautifully. This deserves recognition for its rich imagery and thoughtful reflections on life and nature. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/2/2024 8:33:00 AM
It is a beautiful picture that lends itself to excellent imagery, as you developed in your poem. A lovely Autumn poem.
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Date: 10/1/2024 1:11:00 PM
Dear Dr Sotto, another excellent poem from you and its good to see you rhyme too and use some unique rhymes in your poem! I love the way youv painted imagery and created a poem that is so very autumnal as well as fits the september mood! I especially love the lines “ September is unlike every other wraith Colors and weather swing over the day. No other month can claim the same way.“ i can resonate with those lines as i feel like september is not like any other months, maybe for different reasons. Pleasure reading your work as always! Sending you light always
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Date: 10/1/2024 1:03:00 AM
A truly enchanting and soulful piece this is, dear Sotto! Your art of weaving words in a tapestry of lyrical spells whilst conveying immensely deep emotions, is really excellent.. I felt as if, being taken on a voyage, your lines wrapped a philosophically bewitching aura around my heart. Especially these "Amid a moon icy light, marble slabs shimmer", "Loyal ally of the sun as it earns rifeness" I can sense both melancholy and serenity in this write.. And your rhymes are phenomenal as always! so good to be reading your opulent work after a really long time.. Sending best wishes & light ~
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