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September Falls

Summer dims down in search of cold weather
Elements shifting and changing the mood
People spend more time inside together
Time to prepare for winters attitude
Evening now starts earlier each day
Moving closer to the brand new season
Boys and girls back to school recess to play
Elevating young minds for right reasons
Routines come back to family members
Fall officially returns at months end
Autumns leaves wilt right into December
Lazily floating in Septembers wind
Listen to the whispers as winter calls
September is the month when summer falls




Written for contest "September Falls" 09/16/2024
Form: Acrostic  Arrangement: Sonnet Iambic Pentameter
Hosted by Andrea Deitrich

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Date: 10/14/2024 6:33:00 PM
Dear Brian, congratulations for your success in Andrea's contest with your beautiful autumn poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/15/2024 5:48:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work , I appreciate you
Date: 9/30/2024 2:42:00 PM
Brian, thanks for the lovely entry to my contest. i always like exact rhyme, or this would have scored higher. Congrats to you.
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Brian Davey
Date: 9/30/2024 6:18:00 PM
Just getting back into writing again I am a little rusty! Thank you as always I appreciate you and your poetic insight!

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