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September Falls

Summer dims down in search of cold weather Elements shifting and changing the mood People spend more time inside together Time to prepare for winters attitude Evening now starts earlier each day Moving closer to the brand new season Boys and girls back to school recess to play Elevating young minds for right reasons Routines come back to family members Fall officially returns at months end Autumns leaves wilt right into December Lazily floating in Septembers wind Listen to the whispers as winter calls September is the month when summer falls Written for contest "September Falls" 09/16/2024 Form: Acrostic Arrangement: Sonnet Iambic Pentameter Hosted by Andrea Deitrich

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Date: 10/14/2024 6:33:00 PM
Dear Brian, congratulations for your success in Andrea's contest with your beautiful autumn poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/15/2024 5:48:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work , I appreciate you
Date: 9/30/2024 2:42:00 PM
Brian, thanks for the lovely entry to my contest. i always like exact rhyme, or this would have scored higher. Congrats to you.
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Brian Davey
Date: 9/30/2024 6:18:00 PM
Just getting back into writing again I am a little rusty! Thank you as always I appreciate you and your poetic insight!

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