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For Andrea Dietrich's September Falls Contest 15 Sept 24
Stirs gently the breeze of late summer's grace Endowing fall its trails ,and all is fair Pine trees quiver in cool mists which embrace The last of September... winds' final flare: Each ornament from nature's afterglow Mesmerizes these eyes through golden tones, Bearing harvest moon's radiance its flow Enticed by interludes of heated moans. Rainfall melts summer into silver- blue Forever a cycle of rosy sands... Always my year's flamed passion, always true Livening romance, flings, their endless strands. Let September drift far onto the west Still my heart whispers, I am wholly blest! * done on cellphone; some lines indented

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Date: 10/14/2024 6:52:00 PM
Dear Nette, effortless poetic elegance flows with beauty from your golden pen. Your creative, evocative autumn verses are sigh worthy! Congratulations for your success in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/30/2024 1:53:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Nette. I sure hope you get Wifi soon. i loved how you ended this with romance and that last line was wow! Congrats.
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Date: 9/24/2024 5:26:00 PM
Absolutely lovely and grand acrostic on the month of September, Nette. A FAV for me. Have a peaceful Tuesday evening. Blessings :)
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Date: 9/24/2024 5:33:00 AM
Lovely Autumn Acrostic, Nette: I hope you are enjoying Fall. It is heaven to me. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 9/19/2024 5:55:00 AM
Like Susan you've got a rhymed acrostic with an ending couplet. Soooo cool. And your words choices are delicious
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Date: 9/18/2024 3:46:00 PM
Lovely- you did this form justice <3
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Date: 9/18/2024 8:32:00 AM
What a lovely form to blend acrostic with rhyme. A wonderful success ~ delightful
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Date: 9/16/2024 2:17:00 AM
A lovely prelude to autumn. September , though, generally cool, is interspersed by summer heat. The poem holds such captivating imagery. All the Best, dear Nette.
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Date: 9/15/2024 6:38:00 PM
Without the bold lettering, I would have never realized this was an acrostic. Gorgeous penning, Nette!
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Date: 9/15/2024 6:47:00 AM
Hello my dearest poet friend Nette! This is an exquisite acrostic poem of Sept. Fall. So creatively crafted with captivating images and great rhyme flows. A great winning peace for me. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Best wishes always. Hugs
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Date: 9/14/2024 11:48:00 PM
Lovely write. Enjoyed so. God bless you with a win. much love, Gina
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