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September Eleventh Senyryus



                         ~ IN MEMORIAM ~
                               

                       
                             
                   innocent lives, lost
                   nine-eleven, Towers fell
                   we shall not forget



                   bodies never found 
                   by God, were not forsaken 
                   souls, heavenly bound


                    sad, September day
                    our universe, indeed mourned
                    stillness all around

     
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Eagle Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 10:09 PM
This is a wonderful tribute on this day we should never forget! A very somber day. Muslim terrorists attacked our Country and murdered thousands. People burned to death and others who jumped to their deaths. Go to NYC and spend time at the 9/11 Museum, or the Pentagon or Pennsylvania. Read the debunking myth reports by Popular Mechanics. -NEVER FORGET 9/11!!
Romios Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Fabulous. You provided sources we can access, if we -choose! Questions…… you know Edna, it’s always good to have an open mind. Thank you very much.. and I appreciate your sensitivity. To loss of life., kudos for your patriotism. Pangie xx
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September 11, 2023 at 8:07 PM
Beautiful tribute, Pangie. :)
Romios Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:30 PM
A,Kim’s, a beautiful response from a beautifil Poet. Thank you. Pangie xx
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:15 PM
Somber, but appropriately so, methinks. Your senryus bring back the mood of the day, which I had quite forgotten amidst all the hyperbole of the memorial ceremonies. Great job!
Romios Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:23 PM
If my husband and his work mates were fried like baloney in the twin towers, you can bet I would want a ceremony. Robert Kennedy, Junior thinks it will be a good idea to have September 11 be a national day of remembrance, and I totally agree with them. Moreover, you should be a democratic candidate for president. A man of integrity who does not lie. Don’t worry, they will try to stop him. By the DNC changing Primarh Process..a Schandre! Pangie xx 9/11 is not mentioned in schools? Oh, I forgot, we must adore Muslims and loathe Jews and Christians!
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September 11, 2023 at 5:15 PM
Beautiful senryu Pangie! Those poor people who died due to our gov and others...tragic deaths and no justice. I think up to 10 of the supposed highjackers weren't even on the planes. Also, how could jet fuel that can't reach a high enough temp to melt steel, pulverize steel, concrete, and glass to dust? How did WTC 7 collapse in freefall due to paper fires. How did insiders short the airlines stock before that day? We'll never forget whoever from wherever got away with murder that day.
Romios Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Reply in soupmail later tonight, Thank you, David for the most open and questioning comment I ever saw since first came here years ago. Pangie xx
Hinshaw Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:27 PM
Thanks for honoring those folks and their families who were caught up in that terrible tradgedy - very well composed!
Romios Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:35 PM
Sorry, how did I miss this. It was a horrible day. Followed by six funeral and church service. I, for one, will never forget the peaceful world with Olivia, and how we work together. You no doubt remember, that got entire world warmed with us in the Muslims. I remember the Palestinians celebrated in the streets that we were all dead.. I could not believe such outrageous in humanity. And they still think they own Israel. And I know the YSA is considered a big snake and Israel small snake. Either way they want to get rid of both of us. Thank you, Bob, Pangie xx
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September 11, 2023 at 12:12 PM
Hello Panagiota, This is a day that will always be remembered. It was an awful day for all .It should have never happened. Hugs./ Darlene\ xxx
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September 12, 2023 at 10:25 AM
Hello Panagiota, Apologies accepted. Yes I did noticed that tom and I were the first. to response to comment. Okay that is fine. . Hugs. /Darlene\ & Sparkles. xxx
Romios Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:39 PM
Dear DRlene,, I answered this hours ago, and I don’t know what happened. I just saw there was no reply. Gee? Sincere apologies, Pangie. Will you and Tom were the first responders. I have had a busy day and will talk tomorrow, OK?? Pangie And Irene Xx
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September 11, 2023 at 12:10 PM
It changed the world forever, I still see those harrowing images of people falling to their deaths, I hope those that carried out the attacks burn forever in hell. Tom
Romios Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 12:31 PM
Tom, me too. HELL IS GOING TO BE A CROWDED PLACE. I think of all the kids grew up without moms or dads. Even pregnant women died, Interesting how the first comments are from the United Kingdom and Canada. And my country? Missing in action.. That gives me a heavy heart, Hugs, Pangie,PS on 9/10, the nutty mayor of New York, cut back overtime pay for the police and the fireman? That city right now is a hell hole. With less police, it’ll be a double hell hole. Pangie xx thank you.
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