Nette Onclaud Poet Quatrain

September Brides

SEPTEMBER BRIDES
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magenta boughs sheer as bridal lace
adorn mid summer-time trees
they flutter like acrylic confetti glazed,
and scattered on rapturous breeze

Botticelli petals drift like scarlet flakes down
to gather round pastoral feet,
their fragrance fills September’s gown
with brushstrokes so apricot sweet

bridal trees alight as beguiling mists
all clad in sultry glow’s array
awoken by a waft of groom's kiss
on this, God’s first September day...



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Especially for Brian’s September
By nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2011 at 9:04 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's sponsored contest Nette. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2011 at 9:45 AM CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON FIRST PLACE WIN WITH LUV AND BEAUTIFUL LINES LUV..

Margaret Foster September 17, 2011 at 10:17 PM Congratulations Nette, I love the Botticelli petals. well done. cheers Marg.

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 17, 2011 at 7:42 PM WOW!! congratulations on your win!-----Lori

John Freeman September 17, 2011 at 12:34 PM Nette, Lovely Quatrain! a superb win, worthy of the glory. Congratulations. Agape, Moses

Bob Quigley September 17, 2011 at 12:10 PM Well written nette. Congratulations on your win.

Connie Marcum Wong September 17, 2011 at 9:47 AM Beautiful, just Beautiful! Congratulations on your well deserved win. I have to keep this in my favorites.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2011 at 8:46 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Brian, nette

Elizabeth Wesley September 4, 2011 at 8:49 PM Beautiful verse Nette on my favorite time of the year. You are in touch with this one.!

Caryl Ramsdale September 4, 2011 at 6:08 PM "with brushstrokes so apricot sweet" stood out as a best line for me. Loved it! Good luck as Brian judges. CR

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 4, 2011 at 3:45 PM so very pleasant reading exquisite poetry created from your pen and emotion Nette luv.. good luck in the contest with this vibrant beauty luv..

Russell Sivey September 4, 2011 at 12:46 PM Beautiful, simply beautiful! I think this is one of your best works Nette! I love the flow of this poem a lot, very wonderful!! You will do well in the contest!!

Judy Ball September 4, 2011 at 9:31 AM This is the very best I've read so far Nette. Spectacular. Thanks for sharing this wonderful verse. No need to wish you good luck. It's first place for sure. God Bless, JB

Tony Lane September 4, 2011 at 8:07 AM Beautiful entry Nette. Good luck with it. Tony

Sara Kendrick September 4, 2011 at 7:27 AM Reads like a winner..Good luck..I am sure that Brian will enjoye this one...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Jun-Jun Villanueva September 4, 2011 at 4:20 AM wow~~~a winning PIECE~~~good luck~~*-*smile my friend~*~

Gwendolen Song September 4, 2011 at 3:12 AM Nette~This is every bride's dream come true...the perfect dress and wedding. Is it all a dream or could it really be true? Fragrances filling a gown and apricot sweet? Your artistry strokes are all over designing this gorgeous piece. Humbled. simply humbled! Gwendolen

Kash Poet September 4, 2011 at 2:52 AM Wonderful imagery here Nette with elegent words.Another gem.Best wishes in Brian's contest.

Charles Henderson September 4, 2011 at 2:46 AM this one scores high in my expectation. But I did send you a soup mail about it. Charles