September

                    white sheets 
           quiver in the cold breeze~ 
               summer surrenders
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 7:51 PM
Also I a. September baby!! Congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 7:50 PM
If I had a top tier of first places, yours would be there. This is stunning haiku
Green Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 6:57 PM
This was really nice, this feels like the remnants of summer.
Allison Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Lovely imagery david:-) hugs Jan xx
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