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S ilent fallen leaf is nothing more than E nding summer’s waving good bye P urple, yellow, russet and brown leaves T umbling down and swept in a heap E xhausted trees are ready to sleep on M ulticolored, rich and rare carpet lay B lowing soft wind singing the carols E ven the spring beauty has no such grace as R esting one autumnal face I have seen. +++ August 31, 2014 Form: Acrostic Fourth Place win

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Date: 9/17/2014 8:38:00 PM
Spendid piece Dr. amazing grace. Congrats
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Date: 9/17/2014 5:24:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/17/2014 12:10:00 PM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Nice idea to do an acrostic. Well done. Nice poem and win. congratulations. Have a great day. Earl
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Date: 9/17/2014 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.
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Date: 9/17/2014 4:18:00 AM
- Congrats on your 4th place - A lovely poem Dr. Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2014 8:45:00 PM
I enjoyed the calm and peaceful feeling in these words. I especially loved those first two lines.... A very nice, smooth flowing acrostic poem. Great work, Dr. Ram! Congrats on your win!
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/17/2014 5:11:00 AM
Thanks, Kelly.
Date: 9/10/2014 6:15:00 PM
it was another miserable, muggy day today. ah, sweet, soothing autumn. come quick. ease this summer away. a very apropos piece. I really enjoyed reading it and almost felt a cooling brace of air. thank you.
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:47:00 PM
A very elegant poem. The last two lines really define its grace. I am feeling sad already for fall coming and taking away my summer!!
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:44:00 PM
My, my, my !!! This is lovely !! While spring is my favorite season... Autumn holds a close second. Wonderful movement in your poem !!
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:39:00 PM
- Beautiful "Summer's End", Dr. Ram - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:32:00 PM
Delightful read Dr Ram! Good luck!
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:27:00 PM
this is masterful. a treat to read.
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Date: 8/30/2014 11:53:00 AM
you have painted a stunning picture of autumn with this great acrostic:-) Good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xxx
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