Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Acrostic

September

S ilent fallen leaf is nothing more than          
E nding summer’s waving good bye
P urple, yellow, russet and brown leaves
T umbling down and swept in a heap
E xhausted trees are ready to sleep on
M ulticolored, rich and rare carpet lay
B lowing soft wind singing the carols
E ven the spring beauty has no such grace as
R esting one autumnal face I have seen.
           
                    
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August 31, 2014
Form: Acrostic
Fourth Place win

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Mark Trichet September 17, 2014 at 8:38 PM Spendid piece Dr. amazing grace. Congrats

Jan Allison September 17, 2014 at 5:24 PM Dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker September 17, 2014 at 12:10 PM Hi Dr. Mehta, Nice idea to do an acrostic. Well done. Nice poem and win. congratulations. Have a great day. Earl

Brenda Meier-Hans September 17, 2014 at 7:29 AM Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 17, 2014 at 4:18 AM - Congrats on your 4th place - A lovely poem Dr. Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler September 16, 2014 at 8:45 PM I enjoyed the calm and peaceful feeling in these words. I especially loved those first two lines.... A very nice, smooth flowing acrostic poem. Great work, Dr. Ram! Congrats on your win! Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2014 at 5:11 AM Thanks, Kelly.

Michael Miers September 10, 2014 at 6:15 PM it was another miserable, muggy day today. ah, sweet, soothing autumn. come quick. ease this summer away. a very apropos piece. I really enjoyed reading it and almost felt a cooling brace of air. thank you.

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2014 at 4:47 PM A very elegant poem. The last two lines really define its grace. I am feeling sad already for fall coming and taking away my summer!!

Debra Squyres August 30, 2014 at 12:44 PM My, my, my !!! This is lovely !! While spring is my favorite season... Autumn holds a close second. Wonderful movement in your poem !!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2014 at 12:39 PM - Beautiful "Summer's End", Dr. Ram - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 30, 2014 at 12:32 PM Delightful read Dr Ram! Good luck!

Maurice Yvonne August 30, 2014 at 12:27 PM this is masterful. a treat to read.

Jan Allison August 30, 2014 at 11:53 AM you have painted a stunning picture of autumn with this great acrostic:-) Good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xxx