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Image result for pictures of sedum autumn joy I should have planted more of these back when I was able.

september

Collum Lune, a type of Haiku which is word based. 3/5/3

september golden sunrise

foggy creek rise in hollow....

sedum autumn joy 
  
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Valsa George

September 18, 2026 at 8:13 PM

September looks lovely with the magnificent clusters of pink blooms. Is it your yard? Beautiful haiku.

Sara Kendrick

September 19, 2026 at 4:31 AM

Valsa, I do have some sedum autumn joy in my yard, but I have not felt up to gardening at all since my eighth birthday. It is so dry that it is not going to do much this year. I have not tried to water anything because I have not been up to doing that. I have something called veinous insufficiency going on which I am supposed to have a procedure done on this coming Tuesday to help restore some better circulation. It is veinous valves not working well anymore which inherited. Sara K.

sara Etgen-Baker

September 6, 2026 at 4:11 PM

I agree with Howard...your poem is atmospheric and subtly colorful. Nicely done, Sara K. 😊

Sara Kendrick

September 6, 2026 at 5:01 PM

Why, thank you, Sara B. Your visit is supportive and uplifting. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Howard Kerr

September 4, 2026 at 10:57 PM

Your poetry portraits are lyrical and atmospheric, Sara. Word selections I love and how you use colour wisely. The curved line a pleasing design.🔥🔥🔥 Happy September, Howard

Sara Kendrick

September 5, 2026 at 5:24 AM

Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the visit and kind review. It is nice to have this particular plant to grace my yard in fall even when it begins to get dry. The deer ate that plant down to a nub last fall. I guess the herds around here have gotten larger than the food supply available for them. Your visit is uplifting. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Andrea Dietrich

September 4, 2026 at 10:34 PM

Cute. It looks like the poem is a flower sitting on top of its stem "blooms"

Sara Kendrick

September 5, 2026 at 5:11 AM

I am delighted you saw that, Andrea. Thank you for the visit and creative comment. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Nette Onclaud

September 4, 2026 at 5:49 PM

your september explodes with the grandeur of blooms, sara... love it!

Sara Kendrick

September 5, 2026 at 5:10 AM

I am delighted you love it, Nette. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K. 👍⭐

Evelyn Judy Buehler

September 4, 2026 at 2:26 PM

This poem provides sensory delight, Sara, both through the pretty images, and the cascading word, blooms. So enjoyable!😊

Sara Kendrick

September 5, 2026 at 4:57 AM

Thank you, Evelyn. I appreciate the smiley face. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Paula Goldsmith

September 4, 2026 at 1:49 PM

I enjoyed reading. Your "september" is a wonderful write. Great/Pretty Picture..... Have a lovely day/weekend writing away............

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2026 at 5:12 PM

Thank you, Paula. Your time spent here is appreciated. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 4, 2026 at 11:17 AM

- I have many of these in my garden, blooming at this time - Lovely poem, Sara :) - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2026 at 5:09 PM

Awesome that you would have many of those plants, Anne-Lise. I know you have something really lovely to look at every day. Thank you for your time spent here today. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

September 4, 2026 at 8:12 AM

Dear Sara, I've always loved your haikus, it's always been a favorite form. I should post more of them, but in the meantime, I will enjoy reading yours. Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2026 at 5:03 PM

Why, thank you, Daniel. I need all the blessings I can get. I am delighted that you enjoy reading my Haiku. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Hiya Sharma

September 4, 2026 at 6:01 AM

Bathed in golden blushhhhh! Yesss! I feel autumn fairies spinning around me with this very delicate and beautiful haiku, my dear Sara 😍 🍁 🍂 🧚 autumn has certainly become a season that I look forward to, in the recent years, as it feels so magical and whimsy; before I was a summer baby.. but my preferences have now shifted more towards winter haha! Loving the atmosphere here! Enjoyed reading! Sending you fall stars and auburn sunshine! ⭐⭐🌙🌙💫💫

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2026 at 4:57 PM

Why, thank you, Sharma. Sometimes we have changes in our lives as what we prefer as far as food and seasons of the year. I appreciate your time spent here. 👏👍. Sara K.