Seperated From God

My soul feels so empty,
I'm confused and torn,
Why can't you take away
this hurtful feeling.
Do you even hear my cries
of what this person is doing to me,
I can't see any footprints
or a shadow of you,
I feel so all alone,
Yet I hear the ocean roar,
I need to know everything
will be alright,
Could you give me a hug,
I need more!

by, Valerie Zmuda
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Timperley Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 5:49 AM
Hi, Valerie, I guess we all get this feeling at sometime in our walk of life. Seems the trick is to hold on until that particular down turns upward again. Life is a roller coaster. God Bless. D.
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October 10, 2018 at 3:52 AM
lovely poem. its loyal feeling of GOD
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