Seperate Paths

Holding Hands in parks,
Under a Carpet Of Stars,
and dancing Moon above.
Kissing Under the Lanterne,
Lost in Yesterday's Sweet love.



Charma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 20, 2010 at 6:59 AM
OH how I can relate to these words of your Tanka.. especially right now... yes! .. I am quite certain that in the end your title will be my fate that awaits... keep u updated. ...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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February 20, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Charma, Reading your poetry this morning has been a wonderful way to start my day. Thank you for sharing your romantic words in this lovely poem. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
Haick Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 8:59 PM
Memories....Thank goodness for warm memories...Enjoyed this nice romantic Tanka. Peace, Audrey
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February 19, 2010 at 7:51 PM
Very sweet!
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February 19, 2010 at 7:27 PM
Charma this is very nice and romantic...enjoyed...Marty
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February 19, 2010 at 5:27 PM
Memories how great. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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