Separation

life is a path of complex sensation
the walk being through thick cloud..
and when there is a call for unthought separation
its tears which do the talks aloud...

look the moon lacks shine and calm
freshness eludes my little room..
the picture is your waving palm
all covered with the clouds of gloom...

now even in loud cheerful laughs
there is something which holds me within..
like two little separated halves
something separates the lands we live in...

the memories of days of togetherness
are like wounds fresh and new..
which bring in pain so endless
everytime life reminds me of you...

the joys, the plays, the long hour talks
all seem a story untold..
the jokes, the fun and the everyday walks
all remain with happiness to unfold...

come back oh!, the time is so late
its hard to refrain..
the wait has been long, lets change our fate
cause without you life looks on with disdain...

absencebreak upheartbreakmemoryrhyme

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Beata Agustin

September 23, 2024 at 9:19 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

February 21, 2016 at 6:11 PM

nice to see this one again

Skat A

December 29, 2015 at 8:11 PM

ANMOL SAMAL, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 8, 2015 at 6:23 AM

- A great and touching poem, Anmol - Welcome to P - Soup :) - I wish you a wonderful weekend, with many smiles and sunshine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anmol Samal

May 10, 2015 at 5:13 AM

Thank you so much Anne for dropping by my poem...wish you the same... thanxx..

Poet Destroyer A

May 4, 2015 at 3:23 PM

Hi Anmol, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Anmol Samal

May 5, 2015 at 2:08 AM

Thank you so much Linda for your warm welcome.... Even i am very lucky to be friens with you...

Skat A

May 4, 2015 at 2:53 PM

Anmol, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anmol Samal

May 5, 2015 at 2:02 AM

Hey SKAT... Thank you for your warm welcome... would love to be a great and strong friend of yours... and thanxx for ur visit and very happy to hear from you...HUGS...