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Separation

life is a path of complex sensation the walk being through thick cloud.. and when there is a call for unthought separation its tears which do the talks aloud... look the moon lacks shine and calm freshness eludes my little room.. the picture is your waving palm all covered with the clouds of gloom... now even in loud cheerful laughs there is something which holds me within.. like two little separated halves something separates the lands we live in... the memories of days of togetherness are like wounds fresh and new.. which bring in pain so endless everytime life reminds me of you... the joys, the plays, the long hour talks all seem a story untold.. the jokes, the fun and the everyday walks all remain with happiness to unfold... come back oh!, the time is so late its hard to refrain.. the wait has been long, lets change our fate cause without you life looks on with disdain...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/21/2016 6:11:00 PM
nice to see this one again
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Date: 12/29/2015 8:11:00 PM
ANMOL SAMAL, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 5/8/2015 6:23:00 AM
- A great and touching poem, Anmol - Welcome to P - Soup :) - I wish you a wonderful weekend, with many smiles and sunshine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anmol Samal
Date: 5/10/2015 5:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne for dropping by my poem...wish you the same... thanxx..
Date: 5/4/2015 3:23:00 PM
Hi Anmol, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Anmol Samal
Date: 5/5/2015 2:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda for your warm welcome.... Even i am very lucky to be friens with you...
Date: 5/4/2015 2:53:00 PM
Anmol, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Anmol Samal
Date: 5/5/2015 2:02:00 AM
Hey SKAT... Thank you for your warm welcome... would love to be a great and strong friend of yours... and thanxx for ur visit and very happy to hear from you...HUGS...
Date: 5/4/2015 11:30:00 AM
A very lovely heartfelt write! "two little separated halves"...need to be made whole. Thank you for your lovely visit today. Welcome.
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Anmol Samal
Date: 5/5/2015 1:52:00 AM
HEY JADE.. thank u for dropping by my poem...

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