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Separation

Separation My love has flown across the world His fortune there to find And though he kissed me long and hard I still am left behind. For me he’ll send, he promised me. His promise from the heart But as I stand on this dark shore We’re many miles apart. Then as I gaze on this grey sea And gulls wheel high above A rainbow reaches out to me He’s sending me his love. Now here with patience I must wait For happy days to come When I will fly to that far land And we will be as one

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/1/2010 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest ~Margaret~. I loved your poem. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2010 5:18:00 PM

A big congratulations to probably my favorite poet of the iambic meter at the soup!! Luv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2010 5:17:00 PM

Awesome Job Margaret, Congratulations on your wine. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/27/2010 1:17:00 PM

We did it! We survived. We worked diligently. We followed our leader to => success. Now hear the drum rolls! (Ra-a-tat-tat, Ra-a-tat-tat, Ra-a-tat-tat, Ra-a-tat-tat!!!) Congratulations Margaret! You are in the winners circle in the poetry soup members contest: 10 Poems, 10 hours, 10 days sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi! Your poem is super. Big SMILES and lots of Hugs to you. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/27/2010 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations Margaret. LWell done. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2010 12:32:00 PM

Congrats Margaret on your 3rd place win in Debbie's contest... I am so happy to congratulate u once again my friend.. a wonderful poem and win so enjoy this sweet victory..luv.. LInda-Marie.. thankxxx for your kind words also...appreciate...

Date: 2/22/2010 6:16:00 PM

Wow! I really like this one. Heartfelt poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/22/2010 1:31:00 PM

THis is beautiful, Margaret. Thanks for sharing it with us. God bless you both. THanks for leaving your kind comments for me. ....Jimmy

Edward Ford

Date: 2/20/2010 9:25:00 PM

That poem leaves me neary speachless Margaret for years ago I met a young lady visiting from Great Britain, we fell in a sort of love and had a similar experience, the irony of it is when I called her and told her that I was ready she was at the airport on her way to America when she met the guy she eventually married, another of the great tragedies of my life; Thus I write what I know as for the poem, Amazing and I feel you. Sang=) =( The moral people is life does not wait for us take it now.

Hyle Chu

Date: 2/20/2010 5:28:00 PM

I've had these feeling before: separation and the hope of reuniting. Distance and time are cruel instruments to test our love by.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/20/2010 10:21:00 AM

Although it's difficult when we feel left behind, I really like the way you found his love in a rainbow. Such a gift cannot be purchased, only conveyed through God's hands. Beautiful writing! Love, Carolyn