Separation

to be so far apart
in so many different ways
brings a hunger to my heart
a sorrow to my soul.
'twas fate dictated our destinies
that we were to be starcrossed 
in love.

bittersweet is our portion,
though we did fleetingly taste
of intimacy's pleasures.
that is the one memory we can cling to
like the shipwrecked Odysseus
clutching at a spar.

you have lived locked
in a loveless union too long.
we were drawn together too late
by a force momentarily
too strong to resist.
thus did nature play
its cruel,insensitive trick.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Beck Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 7:41 PM
“Our portion, bittersweet, Intimacy’s fleeting taste.” Beauty graces our lives in split moments—a fleeting sunset, a child’s laughter, or the swift fragrance that lingers. It brings joy even in sorrowful places, if we allow it to weave its magic. Great poem. - Stay creative.
Bruce Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 3:31 AM
Sherry ,your perceptive comments make writing poetry for the poet,if I dare to use such a graceful name for my attempts, wothwhile by being appreciated by someone like yourself
Scars Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 7:56 AM
beautiful poem dear Dennis, has a tint of sorrow to it too. ~ thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-) ~luloo
Bruce Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 2:15 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment.I would go as far to say that it is a luloo of a comment
Na Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 10:47 PM
Hi Denis congrats on your win
Bruce Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 4:49 AM
Thank you,Gregory, for your best wishes
Chiri Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 4:25 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
Chiri Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:57 PM
Anytime!;)
Bruce Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Brenda, Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your wonderful comment
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